User:HannahFrandrup/Ramtin Ray Nosrati/Chantelleh Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
This is off to a great start. I couldn't find an existing wikipedia article about Ramtin Ray Nosrati so I would work on the organization of the article and making sure it has a Lead and section headings. I would also check you sources and see if you can find any that are not from a magazine publication. As you move forward it could also be beneficial to add some photographs of Nosrati and some of his housing projects.