User:HannahFrandrup/Ramtin Ray Nosrati/Jayjaywink Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HannahFrandrup


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HannahFrandrup/Ramtin Ray Nosrati


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is clear and well written but the topic may not meet Wikipedia's notability requirements.