User:HannahFrandrup/Ramtin Ray Nosrati/Msyer Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HannahFrandrup, Joannluksza, CoxxCamm712, CoxxCamm


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 * User:HannahFrandrup/Ramtin Ray Nosrati


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This draft for a new article gives a good introduction to Ramtin Ray Nosrati and his work. The article can be developed further with additional sections that go into more detail. It seems there is opportunity for sections on his background, education, career, design style, projects, awards, etc. The draft is definitely intriguing—maybe consider diving into some of these questions when developing sections:

Who are his family? Why did they immigrate to America? Has that impacted him and if so, how?

Where did he grow up in California? Where did he go to school?

What is his entrepreneurial background? How did he start Huntington Estate Properties?

How did he get into this specific work of luxury residential design?

What are some of the homes he has built?

What is his design style exactly?

What is important about the “wow factor”? The interest in entertaining?

Has Nosrati or his projects won honors or awards?

What is Nosrati’s contribution to real estate and design? How has he impacted the industry? Does he only work in Los Angeles or has he had a broader influence?

Is there anything in particular he is currently working on or planning for the future?

Maybe put the quote reading "Nosrati stands out amongst other builders by being the owner, designer and contractor for Huntington Estate Properties" into your own words. It implies a bit of bias coming from the Huntington Estate Properties website.

The mantra quotation is a good example of using a quote because the words came directly from Nosrati. Probably want to make sure that this mantra, or a quotation essentially meaning the same thing, can be found at least one other source to ensure its validity.

Inclusion of imagery would be a nice addition to the article, especially Nosrati himself as well as some of his projects.

Including links to other articles would help support the page as a new article and make it more discoverable once published.

There are a number of reliable secondary sources and the use of citations is strong. However, the article would benefit from the addition of sources from more diverse types of media if possible.