User:HannahGraceBirmingham/Environmental justice and coal mining in Appalachia/OlivierMenard88 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HannahGraceBirmingham


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HannahGraceBirmingham/Environmental justice and coal mining in Appalachia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental justice and coal mining in Appalachia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This attempt of expending on the article is very good. My last narrative project was made on this article so the information that is going to be added is relevant to the source. As written in the draft, the article expansion is incomplete because the citations are missing. With the citations added, this draft will be credible enough to be added on the main article. Also, the source for the citation is not correctly implemented in the text and will need to be corrected.