User:HannahLH/Sustainable agriculture/Savannahmaria Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HannahLH


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HannahLH/Sustainable agriculture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sustainable agriculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall really solid content, but this also needs work with essay voice.

" wide-reaching fear " needs to be cited

"While this mission seems simple, the application is rather complex" is an essay transition

"The potential future inability to feed the world’s population has been widely discussed and hypothesized about for centuries, but has become an increasingly important (Ehrlich 1)" reads like a title sentence.

Good work and congrats!