User:Hannahah01/Multidrug-resistant tuberculosis/Halluimkk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahah01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannahah01/Multidrug-resistant_tuberculosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Multidrug-resistant tuberculosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Be sure to include in text citations! Make sure to add a lead to sum up any new info you are providing. I would take a look at the notes that are in the sandbox and see what they are saying about your new inclusions. One note says that the "prevention" section you have added is an opinion and therefore does not meet wiki guidelines, so I would be wary of that. I think you have done really good research and you have a strong start to your draft, but that some improvements can be made to be more neutral and give credit to those sources you have read through