User:Hannahah01/Multidrug-resistant tuberculosis/Ryangrady8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahah01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannahah01/Multidrug-resistant_tuberculosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Multidrug-resistant tuberculosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
As far as a draft goes you guys are in excellent shape, you have a great structure to your paper and I think it is really well organized and formatted. The origin section of the article is honestly really good and I don't think you will need to add even that much more major information to that section but instead try to maybe focus in on some of the smaller yet important details surrounding the origin on the disease. The mechanism of drug resistance is really good thing to include and I think its very well done, however, I think you could try to explain the sciencey parts of this in a way that could be easier understood by more people kinda like Ed Yong in I contain multitudes. Treatment I don't think I really have to touch on too much you guys have a tremendous amount of info already done. Refrences look reputable and good you already have seven of them too which is good, but always look to add more if necessary.