User:Hannahaycock/Eucidaris galapagensis/Vivekpandey23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahaycock


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hannahaycock/Eucidaris galapagensis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eucidaris galapagensis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looking at your outline, it seems like you have a very well organized article and have chosen good sources. However, you have a lot of sections and some do not currently have any information in them so I would consider condensing them if you have a hard time finding a lot of information. For example, you could combine ecological habitat and geographical habitat into simply a habitat section.

There was no lead section present in the outline so just make sure that when you make a lead section that you include information from all major sections in your outline.

The Biological ecological importance section is the strongest part of your outline and you have a lot of good information that is properly cited with a wide variety of sources. However, it seemed like you were planning to use this as a subsection of Life Span and I don't these sections as being closely related so consider making Biological ecological importance it's own section.

For your reference section, the references look good but I was unable to click on a link that would take me to the source so I would go back and make sure that each source has a link.

Overall, I think your outline provides a solid foundation for the rest of your article. I like the layout and structure of your article and think it will be great as long you are able to find good sources and information. As you continue to add information to the different sections of your outline, I would try to model them like the Biological ecological importance section because I think that section is fantastic. I noticed that the topic you have chosen already has a Wikipedia that has been created and I think that the sections you plan to add will significantly improve the article.