User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)/Aford4706 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahchaise


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schema (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The lead does a clear and concise job of framing the rest of the article.
 * It seems as though you've found information on Jean Piaget's work in this field. Information about his research could be included in the Background Research.
 * The article seems to lack any information on marginalized identities, something that can be greatly affected by biases in people's schemas. This may be something worth looking into and including information about.
 * I think that the information added clarifies the language used in a critical way.