User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)/Emiell490 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahchaise


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannahchaise/Schema_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Schema (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- The lead for this article seems perfect. It gives a clear and simple definition and introduction to the topic. It is fully updated and concise.

Content

- Under the history section in the first sentence, the edit to more professional wording makes it more clear and easier to read.

- The adding of the timeline gives the topic a more clear understanding.

- Under "Schematic processing", there is quite a number of parentheses. This makes the section feel a little overwhelming. It also gives pauses on reading the information, which lead me to losing my focus. If possible, consider deleting these or altering them

- Other than those points, your edited content is well-written and organized.

Tone and Balance

- All information is neutral and does not lead to any certain side.

Sources and References

- All links and references work correctly.

Organization

- Content is well-written and well-organized.

Overall

- This is a very informative article that could be greatly improved with less parentheses in the middle of the information.