User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)/Mksearcy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would re-word one thing, the thing about Jean Piaget. I would just swap a couple words around. Everything else is amazing though, everything you have edited is great. It makes a lot more sense and flows better.