User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)/Sfatima 12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannahchaise


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hannahchaise/Schema (psychology)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schema (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Nice job in adding different fonts to make it clear what is going on with the editing draft.
 * I like how you have rearranged the existing text to make more sense out of it.
 * It would be much easier if you brainstorm you ideas on what information you are presenting in your final draft.
 * Working on one section at a time helps.
 * It would be uncomplicated if you work on citations as you edit texts and not at the end of the editing assignment.
 * Make sure that the sources used are reliable and secondary.