User:Hannahkbaker/Assisted reproductive technology/Jcleophat Peer Review

General info

 * User:Hannahbaker
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Assisted reproductive technology

Lead evaluation
The lead has not been update to reflect new content added by Hannahbaker. However, introduction of the lead is concise and clear as it states what assisted reproductive technology is. It has a barely mentions the article's major sections as it was more geared toward what ART is and what it involved.

Content evaluation
The content of the article is relevant to the topic and up-to-date as it was last edited on September 21, 2019. I feel like a little bit more could be added into the ethics section such as what can be an issue ethically with ART and potential ways to prevent unethical actions.

Tone and balance evaluation
The content in this article is neutral and doesn't contain any heavily biased views. The contains contains a neutral tone as it was more factual and informative.

Sources and references evaluation
The sources within this article are a mixture of old and new sources. However, a good majority of the sources are reliable due to them being scientific journals or information from reliable organizations like the CDC. The links within this article works.

Organization evaluation
The content is well written, but I feel like the lead can be worded better so that i can flow. The article does not contain a lot of grammatical errors. The organization of the article overall flows and is neat, which makes it very easy to read.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation
The article only contains two pictures which illustrates a part of ART and contains a simple and readable caption. They do adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulatio and are laid out in an appealing way.