User:Hannahzmuzinski/Achlorhydria/Andersbc2754 Peer Review

General info

 * Hannahzmuzinski
 * User:Hannahzmuzinski/sandbox

Content

 * The content that was added was Risk Factors, which is a relevant contribution to any article about disease. I liked this choice of content because it is helpful to everyday people reading about the disease, but also contains information on the epidemiology of the disease- which was the goal of this project.
 * The content added was mostly up to date, I think that would be one area that could use improvement because one of the sources is from 2016. I don't think this is a big problem as long as the information available has not changed since then.
 * I think all of the content there is good. If you wanted to, you could alway add a section on risk based on gender or ethnicity.

Tone and Balance

 * I think that the content you added to the article is neutral. I don't see any bias toward a certain position or certain viewpoints.
 * I don't think you're trying to persuade the reader to look at one viewpoint compared to another, this is more just neutral information.

Sources and References

 * I think the sources you used are reliable, they all had their own sources from different medical journals and databases.
 * I think the sources you picked were good because you used a variety of websites, along with a journal article.
 * The sources were very current except the one used from 2016, which is still pretty current.
 * All of the links worked.

Organization

 * I liked the categories you chose to put the information in, I think it helps to break up the section. I think you should add an introduction sentence to the autoimmune disorders section.
 * Grammatical errors (sections from your sandbox, I bolded the error)
 * An absence of hydrochloric acid increases with advancing age. A lack of hydrochloric acid produced by the stomach is one of the most common age-related caused of a harmed digestive system. (should be causes)
 * These have also proved to be factors of acid secretion in the stomach. (Maybe change it to 'also been proven')

Overall impressions

 * I think adding this section has really increased the quality of this article. I think people that are worried about or want to know more about Achlorhydria should have access to possible risk factors to understand the condition better.
 * Overall, I think the changes you made are easy to understand and well organized. The only thing you need to work on is maybe just adding an intro sentence to the second section and fixing a couple of grammatical errors mentioned above. Good job!