User:Hannatol01/Pediatric concussion/Brooklynfedie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannatol01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannatol01/Pediatric_concussion?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pediatric concussion
 * Pediatric concussion

Evaluate the drafted changes
Is there any numbers associated with how much more male concussions then female in sports-related and the different school levels (incidence)?

Increased incidence and prevalence over the years can also be associated with requirement of physicals for school sports and screening before the season of sports that have a high chance of concussion (part of the protocols mentioned).

Overall, I believe this draft was well done with reliable sources that sums up the epidemiology of pediatric concussions. There are only a few small things that could be improved on. The explanations for the trends and statistics associated with them are well done and thought out.