User:Hanshenli/Independent and identically distributed random variables/Yibeiiiii Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hanshenli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hanshenli/Independent and identically distributed random variables


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Independent and identically distributed random variables

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Lead Section (10/15)
 * 2) Introductory Sentence: excellent
 * 3) Summary: included in the Introduction section: excellent
 * 4) Context: excellent
 * 5) Article (23/25)
 * 6) Organization: excellent
 * 7) Content: good
 * 8) Balance: good
 * 9) Tone: excellent.
 * 10) Images: no images
 * 11) References (10/15)
 * 12) Citations: not enough citations
 * 13) Sources: good
 * 14) Completeness: good
 * 15) Existing article (/20)
 * 16) New sections: /
 * 17) Re-organization: /
 * 18) Gaps: /
 * 19) Smaller additions: /
 * 20) New article (/10)
 * 21) Coverage: /
 * 22) Article body: /

Total (43/75) (The user did not make any changes yet, so the last two sections are not evaluated)