User:Hansikanath/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dehradun

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It does not have citations for notable persons in the article. I chose it because it is my hometown.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

The second line is vague, uses convoluted language that does not convey important details like the the history. That comes in much later into the paragraph.

Content:

The content is relatively up to date but can include more information about the governing party, Governor Name, Chief Minister etc.

Tone and Balance: The article is well balanced except in the police section where there is a lack of information, that seems intentional.

Talk Page: The talk page is relatively outdated and there is only some discussion on the origin of the name Dehradun.

Overall: The article requires more citations toward the end, the language can be refined