User:Haolongzzz/Colin Huang/Kris1019 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Haolongzzz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haolongzzz/Colin_Huang?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Colin Huang

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Haolong, after reading your articles, I really like how you insert the section regarding to "shareholders" in your article. With the personal views and awards provided in your sandbox, I can get a better understanding on who Huang Zheng is and contributions Huang is making to the society. Great job! You are making great progress. Really enjoy reading your edits. One thing I would like to mention is that may be you can possibly add a little bit more content on the PDD (Pinduoduo) section, in order to give audience a better understanding what that company is doing, by achieving this may be mention some similar companies world wide. Great work overall!