User:Hapalow/Deaf Ecosystem/Elanajp Peer Review

Hello Hannah² :) I love this, you guys did some serious research to compile that extensive list of Deaf-Owned Businesses! I think this is a valuable contribution to Wikipedia. --Elana

Could you add some pictures of deaf owned businesses or deaf business owners?

Have you considered including or mentioning deaf owned businesses in other countries?

The list of businesses seems like the heart of the article- I almost wonder whether if the title of the article should be Deaf-Owned Businesses?Just a thought.

Since there isn't a wikipedia page for Deaf Community that you can link to, maybe you can provide a brief definition of Deaf Community, including something about use of a sign language/ASL. And/or maybe you can add some external links at the bottom to give people more resources about what the deaf community is.

In terms of marginalization and job discrimination, it would be great to see examples of what that means, maybe you could add information about language/communication barriers, or ADA requirements?

Is there any data on employment stats in the deaf community-- for people who are employed, what sectors do they work in?

This may or may not be helpful: I was thinking about parallel topics so I looked up black-owned businesses and women-owned businesses and a few other search terms. I found a few articles for comparison: Woman owned business actually has a lot of flags, so it's not a model article, but could give you ideas of pieces of information to add to your article. And I didn't find black-owned business, but I found Black mecca. This article is really well done, and I see a parallel because it is an article about a term relating to a minority community, just like "Deaf Ecosystem."