User:Happyboi2489/Statistical hypothesis testing/5740 Grant L Peer Review

The lead section of the article seems well flushed out. There are a couple grammatical errors, however I believe it provides a good introduction to the material. I think it could be beneficial to provide the significance of the testing (AKA applications of the testing). Otherwise, I think the summary is quite concise.

The Testing Process section details quite explicitly how someone would go about conducting a hypothesis test, however there is no math. It does not show how to formulate an actual problem mathematically. I think this is critical for someone to understand, such as adding H0 = 0... etc. Also, some of the steps listed could be condensed. I think it is also possible to provide an example while listing the tests. I think the article as whole has all the sections and possibly more, however there is really a lot of the actual mathematical formulation and calculations. I think the first real example of a hypothesis test is the Clairvoyant Card Game. Hence, it might be beneficial to also reformat some of the other examples or provide another example.

Some of the sections in the article seem a little unnecessary toward the end of the wiki page, considering the problem formulation page is not that long. I think prioritizing the importation and mathematically formulating hypothesis testing are the most important tasks at hand. It could also be nice to have more visual aids. There are a ton of references so you could possibly find some figures there.