User:Happygal414/TikTok food trends/Green glitter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Happygal414


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Happygal414/TikTok_food_trends?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * TikTok food trends

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
Although your lead works well for the section you have drafted on 2022 trends in your sandbox, I am not sure how helpful it will be in the lead of the actual article.

Content
The content you have added is relevant to the topic and helpful to round out the article and keep it timely.

Tone and Balance
The content you added is neutral in tone and does not appear to be heavily biased. The content does not appear to attempt to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
Your new content is backed up by seemingly reliable sources. Although some of them appear to be magazine articles and one may be a blog, these sources are used solely for information on the food recipes so these sources appear to be adequate. Your links appear to work and your sources are current.

Organization
Your content is concise, clear, and easy to read. It is also well organized in sections that make the article flow nicely.

Overall Impressions
The article will be more complete with your added content. Adding 2022 trends will keep the article up to date and complete. The content added will be beneficial to the overall article by covering this year's trends. The content is clear and easy to read, making it helpful for readers seeking information on this topic. The content can be improved by continuing to fill in your descriptions of food items, as well as by potentially adding in more academic sources such as peer reviewed articles, if there are any published on this topic.

Your writing is well-written, clear, and to the point. I would suggest you continue to flesh out your content in a similar writing style to the one you are already using, as well as doing more research to see if you can find any academic sources on this subject. This will further improve your article by creating a more well-rounded approach and bring more credibility to your content. The most important thing you could do to improve the article would be to write descriptions for all of your listed food trends. Your well planned structure and writing style are admirable and will help me as I continue to work on my own article.