User:Harald Northbruk/Second National Front of Escambray/Ag611232 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?gorditagirl21
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Second National Front of Escambray

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?No
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?No

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?No content added
 * Is the content added up-to-date?Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?All the content belongs

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?No they are all pretty netral
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?I would say the whole article needs a little more information
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?Not all of it
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?Yes the sources are all pretty good
 * Are the sources current?Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work?Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes the content is well written
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?There can definitelly be a breakdown of the sections here