User:Hardick.2/Project SIDA/Sankara-ture-lumumba Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (Hardick.2)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Hardick.2/Project SIDA

Lead
The author creates an unambiguous lead sentence that frames the topic and scope of the article.

Content
The content and tone of the article are appropriately objective and the author simply reports important factual details. Sources are cited in a balanced way and the links are operative.

Organization
I would suggest that the lead sentence for the "Conception" section include a reference to opportunistic infections since this section describes infections that preceded the discovery of HIV/AIDS.

Images and Media
N/A

For New Articles Only
The notability standard is achieved here but the information is included in "Work" section that should perhaps be included in the "Projet SIDA" section. Maybe these sections should be merged?

Overall impressions
An great summary and overview of Project SIDA--from its origins to its contemporary impact--that exemplifies the best of Wikipedia. I'm excited to read which threads you connect in the finished product!