User:Harelia/Party of the Democratic Revolution/JohnFrum1441 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Harelia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Harelia/Party_of_the_Democratic_Revolution?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Party of the Democratic Revolution

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additions you have incorporated give more context and information regarding their respective sections that are succinct and add to the quality of said sections.

The main article itself is quite meaty so perhaps continuing along the path you are already on is best, that is, continuing to add small blurbs to the various sections of the article that give more context and elevate the section. Additionally continuing to spot check for any grammatical errors, and or, areas where the language could be altered to flow smoother as you did here -

"By the end of 1999, 650 PRD members of the PRD had been assassinated, mostly by the PRI, as a way to intimidate those working towards democracy, civic engagement, and social movements."

- This is also another avenue you could go down if you find yourself out of material.

Overall, these are solid additions.