User:Harelia/Party of the Democratic Revolution/Oliver darmody Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Harelia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Harelia/Party_of_the_Democratic_Revolution?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Party of the Democratic Revolution

Evaluate the drafted changes
'''The proposed changes drastically improve the quality of the existing article. The drafted changes add significant context and pertinent information to the existing writing. Importantly the placement of the information and the writing style adds to the existing article without disrupting its flow or adding confusion. The already proposed edits don’t seem to need any massive changes and are already in line with the guidelines. Moving forward, it seems that the priority for the project should be to add a bit more to the article in some capacity. If more information is added, expanding the bibliography should also be focused on. Overall the existing draft seems great, and energy could reasonably be focused on the addition of new information instead of revising what has already been proposed.'''