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Article Evaluation

I am observing the article Roxy Paine which notes the articles need for improvisation described as It is true that the article contains lists which differ from prose in that they are less descriptive. I would also recommend adding citations in order to better this article. I would especially revise the Awards section of this article because an explanation would better the already given information. I do however believe that the article is unbiased and entirely about the life and accomplishments of the individual in which the biographical article is about.