User:Harpleigh/Word problem (mathematics education)/Ddotdalllas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Harpleigh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Harpleigh/Word_problem_(mathematics_education)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Word problem (mathematics education)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think I get your general idea of what you are wanting to say, but it is kind of confusing the way that you have said it.

"There are numerous skills that can be developed to increase..."

"while there are many that follow from these main fields..." This sentence seems a little ambiguous, like I am not real sure that part of the sentence is necessary.

"at each level" Maybe something like at each educational stage, so that it is not such a general statement.

Overall, it is a good edit.