User:Harrincm9637/Domestication of the cat/Turuneam8321 Peer Review

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Harrincm9637
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I am unsure how to view the image you incorporated into your sandbox but I see that you asked a question about it. I'm not sure how to view it either. I also cannot see the panel you are providing in the section discussing genetic technologies. There is also no reference to any of the information in that section, so I am unsure of where the information is coming from. What does the study by Lipinksi show? What is it about? Why is it important? I think you could go more in depth on the genetic technologies used and utilize other resources to bring together the main ideas. I'm not sure what genetic technologies are being used and what they are being used for. I would maybe just give a brief overview of the breed and race identification panels consist of. I like that you added your section into the lead so it is not just a random new section being introduced into the article.