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Controversy
The Marquis have had controversy attached to their name since the end of the Nazi Occupation of France in World War II. There are many individuals who claimed membership in the Marquis to escape suspicion after the war of working with the Nazi occupiers. Operations carried out by the Marquis were often exaggerated or dramatized for a more powerful effect. For example explosives instead of being used to destroy a strategic target would be used unnecessarily for dramatic effect.

Shedden suggestions: watch out for repetition of "dramatic" and "effect". You also need to watch commas and capitalization. Above all, add some more examples and specifics to substantiate your claims.

Mckenzie Mungai I agree with Professor Shedden's comments. I also, think it would be helpful to add more information under the "Customs" paragraph, as there is only one sentence now. Also, the paragraph "Equipment", needs to be cited. Overall, I think you're off to a good start, but a lot of sentences in this article need cited that are not.