User:HarryJL/19th century philosophy/LexBrown070 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Harry JL)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HarryJL/19th_century_philosophy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The draft looks like its off to a great start if what I'm seeing here is the lead section. I like that you linked all applicable pages to an existing Wikipedia article which helps the reader get a full scope of what you may be referencing. What you have written so far also gives an objective/unbiased representation of Utilitarianism, so great job on that so far.

So far, my only improvement based on what is written already is that you can format the reference list with the title "RefList" which will also help your in-text citations corroborate in listing a bit easier. Obviously you still have more to add, so I won't comment too much on that but otherwise, you can make sure to include more references and make sure they end up in that designated reflist.