User:Harshnad/Evaluate an Article

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Ginny Weasley

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ginny Weasley


 * I chose this article because Ginny Weasley is one of the vital characters in the Harry Potter series and her bio does not properly convey her importance to the central arc of the Harry Potter series.

Lead
Lead evaluation


 * Yes, the article has a brief sentence outlining details about her role in the Harry Potter series. The lead does not give a brief overview of the character, instead mentions her role in relation the protagonist of the series. There is no indication of what the following sections are about. The lead doesn't include information that isn't explained. The lead is very brief and does provide enough context for the character, which could mislead readers into underestimating her role in the series.

Content evaluation


 * The content is relevant to the topic and offers relevant information about the character. The content is up to date, in accordance to what the author has revealed about Ginny Weasley. Her role in the series is explained briefly but not really elaborated on.

Tone and Balance


 * The article has a dry, neutral tone. The article talks about the character in relation to the protagonists, diminishing her importance to the story's arc. There is not much emphasis on her life after the war, though lots of information has been presented about it on Pottermore. The article does not have any negative connotations about the character.

Sources and References

 * Some facts have been derived from articles from online publications that don't seem to have much relevance to the topic. The resource of Pottermore doesn't seem to have been used and that contains information that the author herself provided on characters and their pasts. The sources are current and the links work.

Organization

 * The article is easy to read but there is not enough information about her. The article is free of spelling errors but does contain sentences that make no sense within the context. The article has clearcut topics that are easy to read through.

Images and Media

 * The images are relevant to what is being discussed and provide context for some of the texts. The caption can include more information on where Bonnie Wright portrayed Ginny Weasley. The image adheres to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

Checking the talk page

 * The conversations are mostly about the formalities of her name- if it should be Ginny Weasley or Ginny Potter (following her marriage to Harry Potter). The article is rated as a C-class project and is designated as low importance on project relevance. It is a part of Wiki projects novels and Wiki projects fictional characters.

Overall impressions
The article's overall status is low importance on Wiki projects and is marked as complete. The article is precise and illustrates biographical information in a manner that is easy to follow. The article could be improved by illustrating her story arc with more detail. The article is poorly developed in outlining her storyline and her relationships with her family, friends and others. The introduction could also use some more detail in order to provide a more rounded profile.

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