User:Hart2me/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Job Strain:
 * Article Evaluation:
 * I think this article could be improved by adding sections related to different stressors, as well as expanding on the various health effects. Also, more on underrepresented groups could be added. I also think citations could be added to substantiate some points. I see places where links to other Wikipedia pages could be added as well.:
 * Sources:https://orca.cardiff.ac.uk/id/eprint/87403/1/Capasso1512016BJESBS24340.pdf ::https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0033350619303506?vi a%3Dihub

Option 2

 * Workplace health promotion:
 * Article Evaluation:
 * This article could benefit from adding citations in the few areas that note a citation is needed. Many of the citations are older than 2012, so there might be new research that has been published that could add to this topic. I also see many places for small grammatical corrections or places where the wording could be adjusted to flow better. I think this article could benefit from adding examples of real or successful workplace health promotion programs. :
 * Sources
 * https://www.cdc.gov/workplacehealthpromotion/model/index.html
 * https://sph.unc.edu/wp-content/uploads/sites/112/2015/08/R.Goetzel.Workplace_Wellness.2014.pdf:

Option 3

 * Occupational fatality:
 * Article Evaluation:
 * The article is in need of a more worldwide perspective, which I think could be interesting to add. I also think it would be beneficial to add information about historically underrepresented groups in relation to occupational fatality. I also see some text in the prevention section that is not phrased neutrally.  This article has a pretty good start, but I definitely see some areas of improvement.
 * Sources
 * https://www.bls.gov/news.release/pdf/cfoi.pdf
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4556419/
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4556419/

Option 4

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 * Article Evaluation:
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Option 5

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Feedback from instructors[edit | edit source]
All excellent choices. You probably do not need to work on all of them. Whenever data on rates (prevalence, incidence) are missing and you can find it, please try to add it. TMorata (talk) 19:41, 2 February 2024 (UTC)