User:Hashimzafar/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:Batman: The Animated Series

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Growing up Batman was my favorite superhero and when I believe I can improve the page.

Evaluate the article
There is no lead section at all and there is no introduction whatsoever. It dives straight into who played the character. There is no coherence or oder to the content displayed. The tone is a bit off as the original contributor is expressing his own opinions disregarding the general policy of wikipedia. Majority of the information is unsourced. And the quality of writing is subpar. The article can be improved by structuring all the pieces in a coherent manner: start off with simple lead and then add information that provides context from the beginning. Use citation to source where the information originated and there should be a balanced tone of the page.