User:Hatsukoizsha/Yang Li (stand-up comedian)/Vzhan Peer Review

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Hatsukoizsha
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Yang Li (stand-up comedian)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yang Li (stand-up comedian)

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Great start! I think you still neet to cite the quotes that you've added from other sources. To do so you just click on the end of the sentence, after the period, that you took exerpts from and click cite and you copy the link onto the box, then you press enter. It will also automatically provide the reference down below so you wont have to write it down yourself. It is a bit unlcear on the on what is the connection between Yang Li and the #MeToo movement, so you might want to elaborate on what she did for that movement. I think you can also add more about why she chose stand up comedy as a way to adress the rights of women in China. You can also provide the year or date of when she made the contraversial joke “How can he look so average and still have so much confidence?” instead of just saying May, and don't forget to include a period after (May). Also you might want to double check your second souce as that link did not work for me.

I hope my feedback helps!