User:Hauen1jk/Bamileke people /Looganealabbas Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Hauen1jk
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Hauen1jk/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * No
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * The original lead does include that
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Yes, the original lead
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * Not all information is added to it

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, it is from 2008
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No there is not
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No there is not
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No it does not

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes the content is cited
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * I would say yes, but there could be more specific sources about this culture
 * Are the sources current?
 * One source is from 2008, but the other is from 1998
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Both are books, one takes me to the book, but the other one does not have a link

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * There are some spelling errors
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * It is good information, but it could be more organized

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * No
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes, it helped me understand a little more about masquerades
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * There are some good details in the content
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * It could be organized in another way, having more information about the masquerades themselves would help more. There is more information explaining the symbols that go into them.