User:Haydenrandolph/Female education/Am0ria1 Peer Review

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Haydenrandolph
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 * Female education

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your additions are great! Your introduction of the Longwe framework is really interesting and adds a lot to the empowerment section of this article, and the expansion of gender equity in education is really well done.

The sources are also recent, and are credible.

The organization of your additions fit in well with the rest of the article - maybe consider adding another sentence to conclude the first paragraph and transition to the next more smoothly.

Nice job overall!