User:Haydenstephens

=Articles that Need Improvement= Jazz Age Tourist attraction
 * This is less an article about the Jazz Age itself, and more about the entire genre of jazz.
 * It is not very detailed about the Jazz Age's exact time period, simply stating that it was a period of time in the 1920s.
 * The section on 'Origins of Jazz' shouldn't be in an article about the Jazz Age, but rather in an article about jazz itself.
 * Altogether, the section headings do not work. Instead of describing the content contained within them, they are too broad, containing titles such as 'Youth' or 'Radio'.
 * The article introduction does not contain an in-depth summary -- instead, it simply contains two general sentences similar to those that one could find in a dictionary.
 * As with the Jazz Age article, this simply does not give relevant information to someone wanting to learn about tourist attractions in general.
 * This article would need to be entirely rewritten.

=Articles I'd Like to Edit=
 * United Nations Conference on International Organization
 * Grammarly (if only for the irony of copy-editing an article about Grammarly)
 * Jazz Age