User:Hayelizabeth24/Bulimia Nervosa/Tiffanyrodi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hayelizabeth24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hayelizabeth24/Bulimia_Nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Bulimia nervosa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Bulimia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The reference links work and direct you to websites that have useful information. The content appears very closely related to the content on the websites, including the sentence structure. I suggest rewording the content so that it reads more original than it currently does. There are many peer reviewed journal articles that can be used as references in this article, it would help to have those as support. The reference page is not formatted corrected, there is a tutorial on how to do that in the training. Overall content is relevant but it would be nice to see more content, including a lead in to the topic. It is a good beginning, it just needs some additional work to help strengthen the passage.