User:Hayelizabeth24/Bulimia Nervosa/Twalton1996 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hayelizabeth24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hayelizabeth24/Bulimia_Nervosa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bulimia nervosa

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Hayelizabeth24,

You are off to a great start! I think that it is a great idea to arrange the article different. I think history should go first as well. I see that you have added your resources after each sentence. I would recommend you citing them rather than just adding the website. The information that you plan on adding is clear and concise. You didn't make it complicated. I was able to fully understand what you added. Have you thought about where you were going to add this information? I would recommend adding it under the diagnosis subtitle. Under the section labeled as Alternative medicine, I believe if you added some information about hypnotherapy it would benefit the article as well. Also, I don't see where you have added any secondary literature. I believe if you add that information it will make the article stronger. Overall, I believe that the information that you are adding will improve the article.