User:Hayleydt/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Marie Jean Philip

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have done some research about her in the past and I thought it would be a great start to evaluate an article I already have prior knowledge about.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is very short and minimally describes the subsections within the article. All of the information in this lead section was within the remainder of the article in some form. All of its content is relevant to the topic, however citations could be updated since some of the links lead to deleted pages. This article has not been updated since 2015, however there is not much new information about Marie Jean Philip since she passed away in 1997. This article does address and underrepresented/misrepresented identity: Deaf people and women. The article feels very neutral for the most part. It leans towards stronger beliefs about Deaf culture and ASL, which I am not 100% sure if it would be considered an opinion or not. Plenty of sources that are reliable but it does need updating due to expired links. Article is clear and concise, but is a bit repetitive at times. Sometimes information found in one sub section is rewritten in a different one, and it feels unnecessary to have it written that many times. There are only 3 images within the article and the captions are very brief, but I believe it doesn't need any more pictures. There are no discussions in the talk section of this page and it has not received a rating, but it is part of the WikiProject Biography. Overall, I feel like it is a strong article, but it does have some room for improvement.