User:Hazel42121/Moral panic/Spicymama01 Peer Review

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Hazel42121
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Its seems like your still in the beginning stage which is totally fine I didn't have much on my sandbox either! I know this project can be hard and confusing at times so I just wanted to hopefully ease your some of your frustrations or worries! You do have the basic which is great for drafting any paper. I read the article you were assigned and the information there was good, but a suggestion I wanted to give you was finding articles or talking more in depth about the different cultural definitions moral panic has. In the article it talked about American sociologist and the UK sociologist having distinct definitions I think finding sociologist from a non-western society might bring in some more clarify of how a moral panic can happen. The article also talked about different moral panics throughout history but it doesn't really go into depth about the consequences these perceived folk devils or deviant people get as a response to the moral panic; I think adding some more information relating to that will help the article overall.