User:Hazel Burris/Patricia Nichols/Blairgreen05 Peer Review

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Hazel Burris


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the group does a good job of introducing Patricia Nichols and who she is at the beginning of the article. The content added, is relevant to the topic and up to date. I feel the content is added and displayed in a neutral way. The article is also structured well and makes it easy for the readers. I also like how you made many of the links, Linkable. The article is straight to the point, but I feel like the article needs more in depth information about Patricia Nichols. I also think adding images, if possible, would help enhance this article.