User:Hazel Burris/Patricia Nichols/Zjdoane Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

hazel burris


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hazel%20Burris/Patricia_Nichols?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you guys are headed in the right direction with your introduction and its a good start. I would talk more about her earlier experiences and then move into her publications, as she is a heavily published author. I think subheading on her most influential work would be helpful and give the article some structure. I look forward to seeing where you guys go with this article because I think she is a great topic.