User:Hb56030/Bacteroides thetaiotaomicron/Eleoni2002 Peer Review

First, there is no lead section as the article goes straight into the "Genome" section of the article. I think the section "History and Taxonomy" should be first in the article because this helps to explain the background on the organism after the lead section. If possible, add a picture of your organism to help further describe it.

The description of enzymes and metabolism of polysaccharides is very helpful, and the descriptions provided are detailed and ample. I would continue adding the information you already have, as it looks like the progress you have completed is very good so far.

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