User:Hb56030/Bacteroides thetaiotaomicron/Jlynn03 Peer Review

The history and taxonomy section was really well done! I like how you kept it clear and concise, it made it much simpler to read. The only thing I might change is the sentence in the genome section where it says "These, along with other expanded paralogous groups, provide valuable insights into the molecular mechanisms that underlie the symbiotic relationship between the host and bacteria in our intestines." This sounds a little bit like a persuasive article but I agree with the point you're trying to make! I just think the language might need to be adjusted a little bit. Overall, keep doing what you're doing, it looks great!

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