User:Hdnguy35/Sleep apnea/Knn0059 Peer Review

General info
Hdnguy35
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hdnguy35/Sleep apnea
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sleep apnea

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead section does include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article’s topic. The lead section mentions the link between Alzheimer’s disease and OSA, however, this is not discussed in the content of article. The lead section is a bit overly detailed.

Content

Additional content added into the "signs and symptoms" and "risk factors" sections provide more easy-to-understand information with added citations. Overall, the article content provides comprehensive information on the topic.

Tone and balance

The article content is neutral. There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward or attempt to persuade the reader in favor of  any particular position.

Source and references

The added content is backed by a reliable secondary source and the content accurately reflects what the cited sources say. The sources are current and reflect the available literature on the topic. The links work.

Organization

The content added is well written and easy to read. It is free of grammatical and spelling errors.

Overall impressions

The content added makes the lead section easier to read and understand.