User:He3525/Digital Curation Centre/Lady Halfwolf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

He3525


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:He3525/Digital_Curation_Centre?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital Curation Centre

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * I would make sure to edit the current Lead section to reflect the updates you are making to the article. Since you are highlighting some of the important work the DCC has done, maybe mention these in the Lead section.

Content


 * The content you added is relevant to the article. I'm actually kind of surprised that the DCC Curation Lifecycle Model doesn't have its own Wikipedia page. I think it is definitely good that you are adding more detailed information about it in your article.
 * You did a good job adding more information about DRAMBORA, but not too much since it has its own Wikipedia page. It's definitely still important that you gave a brief overview of it so that readers understand its connection to the Digital Curation Centre.
 * DAF is another important tool that the DCC helped create. Going into detail about the tools the DCC created helps readers understand the importance the DCC plays in digital curation and preservation.

Tone and Balance


 * The tone is neutral and the added content is balanced.

Sources and References


 * Your sources are relevant to your topic and you use secondary sources.
 * You also use multiple sources to support your different subtopics, which I think adds reliability to the content you added.

Organization


 * Great organization! It obviously makes sense to break up the content by tool.
 * You also did a great job of breaking the content up into manageable paragraphs instead of having large paragraphs.
 * "There are full lifecycle actions, which include description and representation information; preservation planning; community watch and participation; and curate and preserve." - for this sentence, I would just use commas in between
 * "There are sequential actions, which include conceptualize; create or receive; appraise and select; ingest; preservation action; store; access, use, and reuse; and transform." - I would say something like: "There are also sequential actions: create or receive; appraise...." I think you have to use a colon if you are going to use a semi-colon to separate list items

Overall Impressions


 * I think you did a really good job adding new content to the Digital Curation Centre article. The tools you covered are important to the DCC and you did a great job summarizing information about them.
 * Maybe you are already thinking about this, but adding an image of the DCC curation lifecycle model would be helpful (assuming it isn't copyrighted).
 * You are right at the word count, so I think the main thing you need to do is add to the Lead section so that it reflects the new content.
 * Great job! I really enjoyed reading your article! I think it is a huge improvement to the original.