User:He3525/Digital Curation Centre/Serialsgirl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

He3525


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:He3525/Digital_Curation_Centre?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital Curation Centre

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello. I think this article is shaping up nicely. The content is relevant and most sources are less than ten years old and from professional publications. The tone feels neutral throughout. Consider adding an image of the DCC Curation Lifecycle Model if possible, or a link to the image on the DCC website so users can examine it. I also made a couple notes on specific sections of your draft.

Lead

If you have time. The lead of the original article has not been changed. Since it is only one sentence, it might benefit from additions.

DCC Curation Lifecycle Model

Paragraphs three and four do not flow the best when reading. It might be a good idea to read them aloud or have Word or another program read it and see if there are improvements that can be made.

Digital Repository….(DRAMBORA)

First sentence, consider changing word choices, I am not sure if DigtalPreservationEurope (DPE) was created by the DCC or if DPE helped them create DRAMBORA.

Data Asset Framework (DAF)

Because the first sentence after the list of five core questions contains a quote, it might be good to add a citation, even if it's the same citation that comes next in the paragraph.

I think the new content you are adding to this article is going to improve it and enhance understanding of the Digital Curation Center.