User:Hectorhhernandezz/Homosexuality in ancient greece/Fem2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hectorhhernandezz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hectorhhernandezz/Homosexuality_in_ancient_greece?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Homosexuality in ancient Greece

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article does a god job of differentiating between the modern Westernized idea of homosexuality with that of ancient Greece. However, it mostly focuses on male homosexuality and lacks in information on female homosexuality. This could possibly be due to lack of available information on the topic, but many citations are missing from the article, especially in the beginning of it. Adding more information to this article to provide a broader scope of the topic would be helpful. Not only adding more info about females but also on male homosexuality outside of Pederasty. The article as a whole does a good job of organization, a non-bias viewpoint, and the images provided are helpful to understanding ancient Greek culture.