User:Hectorlgonzalez6100/Ena Vazquez-Nuttall/Historicleaf Peer Review

General info

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Hectorlgonzalez6100



Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Lead seems to be missing. Feel like it was probably in that first paragraph so just separating would be helpful for the reader.

Content

Your content was relevant to the topic. I enjoyed reading your legacy section, but maybe to be concise, this could be used as your lead section, as I feel that you talk about her accomplishments throughout the article. Headings might to be adjusted, where Early life and education, achievements, etc. would be headings.

Tone and Balance

Felt that you kept a neutral tone throughout the article.

Sources and References

You used secondary sources that seemed reliable.

Organization

Thought you organized your article well. Felt that it flowed well throughout and was still concise and efficient.

Overall Impressions

Overall, I think you crafted a great article. Felt that I was able to understand the impact of the person. If you wanted to improve the article, you could separate to create a lead section and correct the headings.